close our eyes for good

The only thing I can think of that I don't like about this pic is the lack of use of the space in the bottom-right. You have the bright light up top drawing the eye, and it's broken up by some dark bits; that's cool, that's a good use of light and shadow. So, I think that to keep the feel of the image overall, there should be a bit of detail in very dark shades visible in the blackness in the bottom right. Something vague that doesn't draw the eye would work; that way the viewer's attention stays focused on the detail parts at the top and middle, and yet it would also help with the balance.

Anyway, that's my two cents. Nice pic; despite a paragraph of C&C above, I like the way it turned out.